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#2 · Aug 6, 2004
I can't wait to read the rest the first chapter was good great storyline
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#3 · Aug 6, 2004
That was pretty cool, Mack. I liked it. And I'm not really a big fanfic fan.
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#4 · Aug 6, 2004
Thanks. Very Happy
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#5 · Aug 6, 2004
Shocked Kudos,Mack! That was pretty damn good if I do say so,myself. Laughing
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#7 · Aug 6, 2004
I think it's kinda funny that Angel tell Spike to "stop with the guilt trip". he he.
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#9 · Aug 7, 2004
A bit on the pwoerful side if you ask me Laughing ...seriously I can see all that very clearly as you're laying it out, not bad at all!!
And Tara as a murder victim...do you plan on a career directing low-budget horror films or TV detectives "serieses" Smile Razz Smile ?
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Darla:Well you're certainly like Drusilla described. (voiceover;imbecile)
Harmony;And you seem like you could keep her,Spike, and Angel from killing each other (vo;megabitch)
Both glare then giggle
D: Hey, did you come here for dinner too?
H:Actually I felt like dancing, this place usually hops but tonight it's deader than we are.
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#10 · Aug 8, 2004
I plan on writing the newest spin-off of Buffy/Angel.
I made Tara and Faith cousins... how do you like that?
There's more info on Tara coming in the 3rd chapter... I just got to finish writing it.
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#11 · Aug 8, 2004
Can't wait Mack
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#12 · Aug 8, 2004
Me either hurry oh and i loved chapter 2 as well
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#13 · Aug 9, 2004
I got the outline for the story done...
I'm guess about 9 chapters. Maybe 10 if I go outboard on some of the details. 7-8 if I go too fast.
I'm also trying to watch as much Law & Order to keep my detective mind fresh.
Note: Some of the stuff I write maybe not true to RL. But come on, is a Buffy AU fanfic.
Chapter 3 maybe done in a day or two... keep your pants on.
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#14 · Aug 9, 2004
Heyy makes as much sense as jojo's AU non-spurenatural fic which made Faith and Cordy sisters. I figure Faith and Tara woudl get along very well with each other, at least in mediioum doses
Mex. '01
Darla:Well you're certainly like Drusilla described. (voiceover;imbecile)
Harmony;And you seem like you could keep her,Spike, and Angel from killing each other (vo;megabitch)
Both glare then giggle
D: Hey, did you come here for dinner too?
H:Actually I felt like dancing, this place usually hops but tonight it's deader than we are.
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#15 · Aug 10, 2004
Some of the female characters I can't fit into the story are going to be murder victims... so be warned...
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#16 · Aug 10, 2004
ok just hurry cuz i only have a few months to live just kiddin but i just loved the first two chapters so much you are a very talented writer
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#17 · Aug 10, 2004
Embarassed You're too kind.
Well... I kind got chapter 3 done... Just need to look it over for errors or plot mistakes...
Tomorrow... probably in the afternoon.
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#18 · Aug 10, 2004
I really liked it, except for the fact that you had some grammar and spelling mistakes (I have problems with that).
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#19 · Aug 10, 2004
WHAT!!!! WHERE?????
I hate bad grammer... mostly when it's my fault!!!!!
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#20 · Aug 10, 2004
I don't remember where, but I picked up a few things here and there. Not too many, though.
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#22 · Aug 11, 2004
Officer Harris- Laughing !
And an effective choice of victims; I'm getting visions of the Elevator Killer from _The Man with Two Brains_. Also wonder who else you'll pardon the expression shoehorn into thia.
Mex. '01
Darla:Well you're certainly like Drusilla described. (voiceover;imbecile)
Harmony;And you seem like you could keep her,Spike, and Angel from killing each other (vo;megabitch)
Both glare then giggle
D: Hey, did you come here for dinner too?
H:Actually I felt like dancing, this place usually hops but tonight it's deader than we are.
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#23 · Aug 11, 2004
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#24 · Aug 12, 2004
Excellent Mack!! I wanna read the 4th chapter....got my interest peaked
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#25 · Aug 12, 2004
The Spuffiness starts on 4. And the investigation...
I'm turning the nerd trio into potheads. he he he.
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